METHOD WRITING – INTERVIEW YOUR CHARACTER ABOUT HIS OR HER MOTIVATIONS

Anything You Do or Say May End Up in One of My Books

by F.M. Meredith

The Rocky Bluff P.D. series has many such happenings. The very first in the series, Final Respects, is about the death of a police officer during a domestic dispute. Though the circumstances are much different in the story I wrote, a real situation triggered the plot.

My son-in-law, who was a police officer, told me many tales about incidents that happened while he was at work. Many of them have turned up in different forms in several of the Rocky Bluff P.D. books, and especially in Bad Tidings. The detective’s wife with breast cancer has many similarities to a good friend of mine and her bout with breast cancer.

The main and mostly bad character in Fringe Benefits was based on an actual cop that I knew—of course he didn’t do all the bad things that happen in the book, but he certainly gave me lots of ideas for the plot.

Smell of Death is based on a real kidnapping of a child, though it happened long ago and I changed a lot of the circumstances. It’s in this book that Officer Stacey Wilbur and Detective Doug Milligan begin to notice each other in a much different way than as fellow officers. The title and some of the plot came from my son-in-law telling me that movies and TV shows aren’t able to portray the worst part of a crime scene—the smell.

No Sanctuary is about two churches, two ministers, two wives and one death. Though I’ve never been in a church where the ministers were quite like these two guys, I once belonged to a church where the minister had an affair with the choir director and I learned about it from the church secretary. This book has a choir director and church secretary much like the ones I knew. One of the side plots about a pedophile came from a female vice-officer who told her stories at a Sisters in Crime meeting.

The latest in this series, An Axe to Grind, also has a tie-in to a Sisters in Crime meeting. The guest speaker was a coroner and he delighted in showing us the grisly crime scene slides where the victim had been decapitated. The opening scene of this book is the discovery of a decapitated murder victim.

A ride-along with the only female police officer on the department gave me a lot of fodder for writing about my character,  Stacey Wilbur. From three o’clock in the morning until six, the lady cop didn’t have a single call. As we rode around the city, she bared her heart to me, telling me all about what it was like to be the only woman with a bunch of guys, and how hard it was to be a single mom raising a son on her own. I used a lot of what she told me to create Stacey Wilbur.

This is fair warning, if you meet me, don’t share anything you wouldn’t want to see in a book. However, don’t worry about it, because I change things enough no one would ever recognize that it came from you.

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F.M. Meredith a.k.a. Marilyn Meredith is the author of nearly thirty published novels. Under the name of F. M. Meredith she writes the Rocky Bluff P.D. crime series. No Sanctuary was a finalist in the Epic 2009 best in e-book mystery/suspense category. She is a member of Sisters in Crime, Mystery Writers of America, Epic, and serves on the board of the Public Safety Writers Association. She was an instructor for Writers Digest School for many years, served as an instructor at the Maui Writers Retreat and many other writers’ conferences.

Website: http://fictionforyou.com
Blog: http://marilynmeredith.blogspot.com

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In honor of her new release from Red Rose Publishing, author LaConnie Taylor-Jones asked me to put myself in her leading lady’s (Dr. Laney Houston) place in IF I WERE YOUR WOMAN and respond to this question:

You have just met a man and your relationship with him is like . . . nothing you have experienced before! Without a doubt, you know this man is your soul mate, yet not long into the relationship he learns he has a life-threatening illness. He shares his news with you and even wants to break off the relationship because he may, or may not, survive. What do you do? Do you stay, or do you walk away?

As you know, I spend much of my creative energy crafting fiction—prose. However, LaConnie’s question inspired my poetic response:

If I Were Your Woman a sonnet
By Lisa Lipkind Leibow

If I were your woman I’d champion your cause.
Run miles, plan galas, and hand out wristbands.
Fix my eyes on splendor blind to your flaws
Dance in the rain, climb mountains, and hold hands.

Meaning well, I’d likely say the wrong word.
Though my heart drums desire for your wine musk,
Love ties my tongue on the verge of absurd.
I’d play show-not-tell from dawn until dusk.

If I were your woman I’d wrap you in cashmere,
Savor each moment, each sound, each caress
Free your dreams to float in the atmosphere
Offer my blood and soul to save you? Yes.

If I were your woman, you’d be my man.
Together we’d face life’s uncertain plan.

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If you enjoy contemporary romances that – make you laugh out loud, tackle sensitive life issues with compassion and grace, and introduce you to passionate couples who make you feel . . . love really does conquer all — then join me in the celebration of LaConnie Taylor-Jones’ new release, IF I WERE YOUR WOMAN!

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Be My Guest

Boredom Breeds Fodder for Fiction

by Bill Walker

Writers nearly always find inspiration when and where they least expect it.  Whether it springs from a story on the news, an overheard conversation, or a daydream, inspiration can and will strike like the proverbial bolt from the blue.  That said, I often find inspiration will spring from somewhere inside of me, from things I’ve seen and stored away.

For instance, the first novel I ever wrote, “Camp Stalag,” was borne out of the boredom suffered during consecutive two summers spent at a sleep-away camp in New Hampshire, when I was a young boy.  There were many days, where the usual structured camp activities lost their appeal and we lay about wondering what to do.  Well, we were all fans of “Hogan’s Heroes” at the time, and thought it would be a gas to dig a tunnel between our cabin and our nearest neighbor.  We actually got quite far along before the counselors discovered what we were doing and called a halt to it.  But the seed was planted.  Later, when I was older and starting to think seriously about pursuing a career as a novelist, I thought back on those lazy summer days and wondered: “What if you had a summer camp for adults, and what if that camp were an exact replica of a World War II German POW camp?  And what if once the ‘prisoners’ were there the ‘Germans’ decided to play the game for real?”  The rest, as they say, is history.

For my first published novel, “Titanic 2012,” it was a desire to extend the feelings James Cameron’s movie instilled in me.  I was fascinated by that movie and the real history of the sinking.  And there was a lot of talk at the time, from various people, about rebuilding the ship.  I said, “What if someone DID rebuild the ship, what if a descendant of the Astor family spent his millions doing just that?”

For my latest novel, “A Note from an Old Acquaintance,” it was a desire to recapture a part of my youth.  I spent over 15 years in Boston, which encompassed my college years and thereafter.  It was a wonderful and exciting time–it’s where I met my wife, Debbie.  In many ways, the story is as much a love story about Boston, as it is one involving the characters Brian and Joanna.  To me, that city represents a second hometown for me and I wanted to tell a story, a love story, that would embrace that feeling and extend it to the human characters.  I like to think I succeeded on that note.

In any event, if you’re an aspiring writer, try looking inside yourself for the seeds of inspiration.  What is it that moves you?  Writing a novel is a process that involves all the senses and one which requires total commitment.  For me, writing brings a joy beyond words.  I hope it’s the same for you.

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About Bill Walker

Bill Walker is a graphic designer specializing in book and dust jacket design, and has worked on projects by Ray Bradbury, Richard Matheson, Dean Koontz, and Stephen King. Between his design work and his writing, he spends his spare time reading voraciously and playing very loud guitar, much to the chagrin of his lovely wife and two sons. Bill makes his home in Los Angeles and can be reached through his web site: http://www.billwalkerdesigns.com/

Monkeying Around

by Karen Cantwell

Recently I sat across from an agent, pitching my first novel, Take the Monkeys and Run.  She listened, then quietly pondered without responding.  Finally, she asked me, “Is it really believable that a house would stay vacant for thirty years?  And this business about someone finding monkeys in her yard.  It’s seems far fetched.”

Really?  Because, while my humorous mystery is fiction, it was inspired by true events.

First: my good friend in a nearby neighborhood happens to live next to a house that has, in fact, been vacant for thirty years.  Creepy place.  It is hard for me to drive by without dreaming up another fantastic story about what that house hides within its walls.  So, YES, I do think it’s believable that a house could remain vacant for thirty years.

Second: that far fetched idea of the monkeys.  Well that story hits much closer to home.  Like my own yard.  My neighbor across the street loves to tell the story about the day, soon after she moved into her new house back in 1970.  The day she found monkeys on her garage and in the trees of the lot across the street – where my house now sits.  After calling the police, Animal Control came and collected the critters, but no one ever told her where they came from.  It remains a mystery to this day.

Hmm.  House empty for thirty years.  Monkeys appear mysteriously in a nearby neighborhood . . . thirty years ago.  Now I’m SURE (or am I?) that the two stories aren’t truly connected, but my writer’s mind just had to take them and run.  And voila!  A book was born.  I’m proud to say, that in its earlier draft with a different title (Monkeys in My Trees), the novel was a Semi-Finalist in the 2009 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest.  Re-vamped and re-titled, we’ll see what the future holds.

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Karen Cantwell’s work has appeared in various university and college literary journals. Most recently, her short story “Little Red Boots” won the Editors’ Choice Award at TheNovelette.com.  Another short story, “The Recollections of Rosabelle Raines,” will appear in the mystery anthology, Chesapeake Crimes: They Had it Comin’, due out March of 2010.  She provides readers with short fiction stories at http://fictionfordessert.blogspot.com.

The Other Side of the Curtain

by Meredith Ellsworth

What informs my fiction writing?  So many things:  my childhood, the places I’ve lived, my family and friends, my schools, my hats,  my jobs—oh, and my invisible friend.   I began writing stories when I was perhaps ten years old, and every story or poem contained two elements in varying combinations:  fantasy and my “take” on life.  (I am careful not to say “reality” because how I saw the world around me was, naturally, different from the way everyone else did.)

I don’t know whether other writers do this—I imagine they do—but every person I meet I study carefully and any interesting bits are filed away in a kind of mental clipart board.  I do the same with adventures.  For example, when I was 21 I lived in Egypt and used to go horseback riding on the edge of the desert in Giza.  One day my stallion and I took off and galloped past the Sphinx, racing a friend, barely evading its great paws.  I kept that scene like a snapshot in my memory, and when I write my fourth book (set in Cairo) it will be recreated.  Of course, being fiction, the friend will be my lover, or perhaps the Sphinx will awake, growl, and bat at me in feline anger.

The other element that deeply infuses my writing is that which hints at the existence of an invisible force  that plumps down in the midst of chaos and spreads its peace like a soft chenille scarf over the sturm und drang of life.   My favorite stories incorporate the belief that when you most fear your life is not under your control a hidden magic materializes—an aura, a ghost of mist, a sense that a benevolent presence is hovering near, a presence, rather less than God and more than pixies.

This quiet magic—unassuming, unadvertised—represents the other dimension, the romantic world.   It may not appear to everyone:  or rather, some may never taste it, live in it.  But it does exist—on the other side of the curtain.  And my job as a romance writer is to give that curtain a little nudge,  push it aside an inch or two, so us mortals can breathe in the scent of magic and believe in  living happily ever after.

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Excerpt Lost In His Arms

         Chloe pulled his arm closer.  “It is not just a cut.  It’s a gash.  Look at all the blood you’ve dripped on my floor!  Come here.”  She held his arm under the faucet and carefully washed the grit out of the wound.  “Now just stay there.  Press this paper towel against the cut.  I’ll go get some Neosporin and a bandage.”  She slipped up the stairs and through her bedroom to the bathroom.  As she came out with the supplies she stopped short.  He was sitting on her bed.

            “I thought I would save you a trip.” He spoke diffidently.

            “Oh…that’s…okay.”  Chloe willed herself not to touch his thigh as she sat down on the bed next to him (too close?).  She applied the ointment and bandage, trying to keep her hands from trembling.  He must have noticed anyway, because he put his larger one over hers and gently squeezed.             

“Is the blood bothering you?”           

She hesitated, breathless.  He looked into her eyes, and before she knew it his arms went around her and she was kissing him.  No, he was kissing her.  She lost all sense of time and place and clung to his mouth as though she were drowning and it was a lifeboat.  She felt herself falling, landing on his chest.  He held her tightly, squeezing the life out of her.  Or was it her soul he was drawing into his own?  How could she tell him it was not his blood that was bothering her but her own, boiling up in waves of desire?  He let her go reluctantly, but she held onto his buttons, tearing them off.  She opened his shirt and buried her face in the soft black hairs of his chest.  His hands went to her arms and gently moved her off him to the side.  Slowly he undid her blouse, unhooked the bra and brushed each breast with his lips.  She lay back, her eyes unfocussed, waiting for the touch, living for the scent of his hair.  He looked up through his bangs and blasted her heart out with a glance of those azure eyes.           

“May we?”           

She did not need elaboration.  She nodded mutely. He kissed her neck, her shoulders, her breasts, and down her stomach.  A thousand butterflies fought to escape from her belly.  He pulled down her zipper and tugged at the skirt.  She still lay quietly, lost in pleasure.  It all seemed to pass in slow motion.  Everything felt perfect.  Then he stopped.  She opened her eyes.  “What?”           

His expression had altered.  He was glaring at her, his face only inches away from hers.  “What the Hell am I doing?  This is nuts!”  He sat up, facing away from her. She saw that she had taken his shirt off and his belt and zipper were undone.  For some inexplicable reason his shoes were neatly arranged at the foot of the bed.  She put a hand on his back.  He stood up abruptly. 

A sudden flash of panic hit her. He couldn’t leave.  Not now.  

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            Although Meredith Ellsworth has traveled and lived in Chicago, Boston, Europe, South and Central America and the Middle East, the last 30 years have been spent in the Washington area as a librarian, Congressional staff assistant, speechwriter and editor.   She worked for the U.S. Senate, for the Department of the Interior, and in several library systems, both public and academic. 

Writing as M. S. Spencer, she wrote Lost in His Arms, now available from Red Rose Publishing, Bookstrand, and Amazon.  Her second novel, Lost & Found, will be released in 2010.